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Caroline
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Hallo,
bitte drüberschauen und dafür tausend Dank!!!
Try to express what you think about travelling.
Travelling for pleasure is exciting and it brings fun. You can go abroad to learn a lof of other countries and their people, furthermore about their cultures and customs, otherwise you can flight to a sunny beach only to relax. You can enjoy your holiday without any stress. After such pleasant holidays I think you can manage your everyday life very better until the next holidays and you have much to tell your friends or your colleagues.
But if you have to travel for business it is most full of stress because you have to keep to appointments, most of the time you sit in offices or in conference rooms and you have often to leave on the same day.
Gruß
Caro
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marble911

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Hallo Caro!
Travelling for pleasure is exciting and it brings
fun. You can go abroad to learn a lof of
lot about other countries and their people, furthermore about their cultures and customs, otherwise you can flight to a sunny beach only to relax. "flight" ist ein Nomen - du brauchst das Verb dazu. Was heißt denn "fliegen"?
"otherwise" passt hier auch nicht hin. Ich würde einfach einen neuen Satz anfangen und schreiben "Or you can [fliegen] to a sunny beach just to relax.
You can enjoy your holiday without any stress. After such pleasant holidays I think you can manage your everyday life very
much better until the next holidays and you have much
a lot to tell your friends or your colleagues.
But if you have to travel for business it is most
usually (ich nehme an, du wolltest "meistens" sagen? Das geht mit "most" alleine nicht. Wenn schon, dann "most of the time", aber das hast du ohnehin nachher noch verwendet) full of stress because you have to keep to
appointments, most of the time you sit in offices or in conference rooms and you have often
often have to leave on the same day.
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08.02.2010 19:32 |
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Caroline
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... was täte ich ohne Euch, ehrlich!
Übrigens fliegen heißt "fly"...
Liebe Grüße
Caro
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11.02.2010 14:38 |
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