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I'm here again.
I have written a short story....have a look, please. 
I want to tell you a funny story about “shopping” in a foreign country called: Italy.
My girlfriend Alexandra and her husband visited Castelnovo in Italy.
They went by bus and there were many people. They stayed 5 days. One day in the evening they decided to go in a nearby shop in order to buy anything to drink. They strolled around and saw a big shop in front of them. They entered the nice shop and looked around. There were many different tins, like dogfood, dog bisquits, dog collar and some more. But they couldn't find anything to drink. After a short time they asked the shop assistant. The friendly man answered astonished: We sell some food and drinks only for pets. We are a pet shop...... 
Alexandra and her husband were amazed. They excused and went outside..... 
Dear Nicky, many thanks for correcting my letter.
Take care and all the best for you and your family.
Love Tine
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Good morning, Tine 
I have written a short story....have a look, please.
I want to tell you a funny story about “shopping” in a foreign country called Italy.
My girlfriend Alexandra and her husband visited Castelnovo in Italy.
They went by bus and there were many people. They stayed 5 Bitte Nummern ausschreiben! days. One day in the evening they decided to go in a nearby shop in order to buy anything to drink. They strolled around and saw a big shop in front of them. They entered the nice shop and looked around. There were many different tins, like dogfood, dog bisquits, dog collars and some more other things. But they couldn't find anything to drink. After a short time they asked the shop assistant. The friendly man answered astonished, "We sell some food and drinks only for pets. We are a pet shop......"
Alexandra and her husband were amazed. They excused apologized and left the shop and went outside.....
| Zitat: | Dear Nicky, many thanks for correcting my letter.
Take care and all the best for you and your family. |
It was no problem, Tine. I'll have another look at it when you have done the correction because I have to go now. I promised to drive a friend of mine into town this morning.
Have a nice day.
Love
Nicky 
Love Tine[/quote]
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 Dear Nicky....
| Zitat: | | It was no problem, Tine. I'll have another look at it when you have done the correction because I have to go now. |
I have corrected my letter and hope so much that it is all right now. 
I want to tell you a funny story about “shopping” in a foreign country called Italy.
My girlfriend Alexandra and her husband visited Castelnovo in Italy.
They went by bus and there were many people. They stayed five days. One day in the evening they decided to go in a nearby shop in order to buy something to drink. They strolled around and saw a big shop in front of them. They entered the nice shop and looked around. There were many different tins, like dogfood, dog bisquits, dog collars and any other things. But they couldn't find anything to drink. After a short time they asked the shop assistant. The friendly man answered astonished, "We sell some food and drinks only for pets". We are a pet shop.
Alexandra and her husband were amazed. They apologized and left the shop.
Nicky, many many thanks for your correction and for your time. 
See you later....
Lovely greetings
Tine
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Good morning, Tine
| Zitat: | | I have corrected my letter and hope so much that it is all right now. |
I shall have a look and tell you 
I want to tell you a funny story about “shopping” in a foreign country called Italy.
My girlfriend Alexandra and her husband visited Castelnovo in Italy.
They went by bus and there were many people. They stayed there for five days. One day in the evening they decided to go in a nearby shop in order to buy something to drink. They strolled around until they saw a big shop in front of them. They entered the nice shop and looked around. There were many different tins, like dog food, dog biscuits, dog collars and any other things. But they couldn't find anything to drink. After a short time they asked the shop assistant. The friendly man answered astonished, "We sell some food and drinks but only for pets". We are a pet shop.
Alexandra and her husband were amazed. They apologized and left the shop.
Very good Tine. I have only changed a few things.
Love
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Dear Nicky. 
| Zitat: | | Very good Tine. I have only changed a few things. |
That's allright. Thereby I can get better.
I want to tell you a funny story about “shopping” in a foreign country called Italy.
My girlfriend Alexandra and her husband visited Castelnovo in Italy.
They went by bus and there were many people. They stayed there for five days. One day in the evening they decided to go in a nearby shop in order to buy something to drink. They strolled around until they saw a big shop in front of them. They entered the nice shop and looked around. There were many different tins, like dog food, dog biscuits, dog collars and any other things. But they couldn't find anything to drink. After a short time they asked the shop assistant. The friendly man answered astonished, "We sell some food and drinks but only for pets". We are a pet shop.
Alexandra and her husband were amazed. They apologized and left the shop.
Dear Nicky, many many thanks for your time and your friendliness.
Love Tine 
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Hello Tine
Thanks for letting me know. The best thing to do is to send a pn.
I want to tell you a funny story about “shopping” in a foreign country called Italy.
My girlfriend Alexandra and her husband visited Castelnovo in Italy.
They went by bus and there were many people. They stayed there for five days. One day in the evening they decided to go in a nearby shop in order to buy something to drink. They strolled around until they saw a big shop in front of them. They entered the nice shop and looked around. There were many different tins, like dog food, dog biscuits, dog collars and any other things. But they couldn't find anything to drink. After a short time they asked the shop assistant. The friendly man answered astonished, "We sell some food and drinks but only for pets". We are a pet shop.
Alexandra and her husband were amazed. They apologized and left the shop.
Very good.
Love
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Dear Nicky....
May I remind you on my corrected letter. I hope, that I haven't made a mistake with my impatience.
I'm so sorry, but it is really necessary to me, to know whether the letter is correct now.
Many, many thanks in advance.
Love Tine
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Dear Nicky.....
At first many thanks for your last correction.
I have written a short story about a mishap by myself....
I want to tell you about a really bad mishap. It was a long time ago. I worked in an office. The accomodation was in a big building on the first floor. I stopped working at four o'clock in the afternoon. I said goodbye and went downstairs. The stairs were made from iron and were coarse meshed. I had on a pair of high heeled shoes. They looked very nice and I felt good. I liked it. In view of the fact, that I was in hurry I went quickly downstairs. But a few seconds later I tripped in the hemline of my coat and fell down. I slid six or seven staircases downwarts. At the first moment I didn't know what was happened. I felt a bit dizzy and after a while I went back to my office. I said to my colleagues what was happened, and they told me that they heard a noise. But they didn't know what it was. After a short rest I went home. But this time I was more cautious than before. On my way at home I stopped driving my car in front of the doctor. After the physical he said to me, that I had a great portion of luck, that nothing was broken. 
Nicky, many thanks for correcting my letter. 
I wish you a nice weekend and I'm looking forward to seeing your correction.
Love Tine
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Hello Tine
Eventually I have got round to looking at your text
I have written a short story about a mishap by myself....
I want to tell you about a really bad mishap. It was happened a long time ago. I worked when I was working in an office. Die beide Sätze habe ich zusammen gebracht.
The accomodation was in a big building on the first floor. I stopped working at four o'clock in the afternoon. I said goodbye and went downstairs. The stairs were made from iron and were coarse meshed. I had on was wearing a pair of high heeled shoes. They looked very nice and I felt good. I liked it. In view of the fact, that I was in hurry I went quickly downstairs quickly . But a few seconds later I tripped in the hemline of my coat and fell down. I slid six or seven staircases downwards. At the first moment I didn't know what had happened. I felt a bit dizzy and after a while I went back to my office. I said to told my colleagues what was happened, and they told me that they _____ heard a noise, but they didn't know what it was. After a short rest I went home. But this time I was more cautious than before. On my way at home I stopped driving my car in front of the doctor. After the physical he said to me, that I had ____ a great portion of luck and that nothing was broken.
Okay, Tine. I have just flown over it because I want to spend some time with my daughters this afternoon.
Love
Nicky
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Dear Nicky... 
I have considered my mistakes carefully, and here is my correction. I hope it so much, that you are content with my correction.
I want to tell you about a really bad mishap. It happened a long time ago. When I was working in an office. The office was in a big building on the first floor. I stopped working at four o'clock in the afternoon. I said goodbye and went downstairs. The stairs were made from iron and were coarse meshed. I was wearing a pair of high heeled shoes. They looked very nice and I felt good. I liked it. In view of the fact, that I was in hurry I went downstairs quickly. But a few seconds later I tripped in the hemline of my coat and fell down. I slid six or seven staircases downwards. At first I didn't know what had happened. I felt a bit dizzy and after a while I went back to my office. I told my colleagues what happened, and they told me that they had heard a noise, but they didn't know what it was. After a short rest I went home. This time I was more cautious than before. On my way at home I stopped driving my car in front of the doctor. After the physical he said to me, that I had had a great portion of luck and that nothing was broken.
Nicky....Many thanks for correcting my letter.
Love Tine
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Hello Tine
I want to tell you about a really bad mishap. It happened a long time ago. When when I was working in an office. The office was in a big building on the first floor. I stopped working at four o'clock in the afternoon. I said goodbye and went downstairs. The stairs were made from iron and were coarse meshed. I was wearing a pair of high heeled shoes. They looked very nice and I felt good. I liked it. In view of the fact, that I was in hurry I went downstairs quickly. But a few seconds later I tripped in the hemline of my coat and fell down. I slid six or seven steps downwards. At first I didn't know what had happened. I felt a bit dizzy and after a while I went back to my office. I told my colleagues what had happened, and they told me that they had heard a noise, but they didn't know what it was. After a short rest I went home. This time I was more cautious than before. On my way at home I stopped driving my car in front of the doctor. After the physical examination he said to me, that I had had a great portion of luck and that nothing was broken.
Tine, you have written it very well, but your sentences are too short. Please try to use more "conjunctions" - and, while, but, so, although ..... because then the story is also easier and better to read.
Love
Nicky
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Dear Nicky....I'm here again.
| Zitat: | | Tine, you have written it very well, but your sentences are too short. Please try to use more "conjunctions" - and, while, but, so, although ..... because then the story is also easier and better to read. |
I'm agree with you.....
If I write the next story, I will respect your good advices.
I want to tell you about a really bad mishap. It happened a long time ago. When when I was working in an office. The office was in a big building on the first floor. I stopped work at four o'clock in the afternoon. I said goodbye and went downstairs. The stairs were made from iron and were coarse meshed. I was wearing a pair of high heeled shoes. They looked very nice and I felt good. I liked it. In view of the fact, that I was in hurry I went downstairs quickly. But a few seconds later I tripped in the hemline of my coat and fell down. I slid six or seven steps downwards. At first I didn't know what had happened. I felt a bit dizzy and after a while I went back to my office. I told my colleagues what had happened, and they told me that they had heard a noise, but they didn't know what it was. After a short rest I went home. This time I was more cautious than before. On my way at home I stopped driving my car in front of the doctor. After the physical examination he said to me, that I had had a great portion of luck and that nothing was broken.
Nicky....I can't understand the two sentences with stopped working/driving.....
Have a look.....please.....
What is the difference ??????? I'm sure, you can explain it...
Many many thanks in advance...
Love Tine
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Hello Tine
I want to tell you about a really bad mishap. It happened a long time ago. When when I was working in an office. The office was in a big building on the first floor. I stopped work  Ich wollte hier etwas anderes hinhaben, aber es fällt mir gerade nicht ein  Wahrscheinlich wollte ich, "I finished / left work at ...."
at four o'clock in the afternoon. I said goodbye and went downstairs. The stairs were made from iron and were coarse meshed. I was wearing a pair of high heeled shoes. They looked very nice and I felt good. I liked it. In view of the fact, that I was in hurry I went downstairs quickly. But a few seconds later I tripped in the hemline of my coat and fell down. I slid six or seven steps downwards. At first I didn't know what had happened. I felt a bit dizzy and after a while I went back to my office. I told my colleagues what had happened, and they told me that they had heard a noise, but they didn't know what it was. After a short rest I went home. This time I was more cautious than before. On my way at home I stopped driving parked my car in front of the doctor's der Doctor sein Haus!!!!. After the physical examination he said to me, that I had had a great portion of luck and that nothing was broken.
I wrote down what you should have written and I think that will solve your problem ;-)
Love
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 Dear Nicky....
| Zitat: | | I was thinking about my mistakes....and I hope it so much, that the letter is ok now. Have a look once again...Thankyou for your time... |
I want to tell you about a really bad mishap. It happened a long time ago when I was working in an office. The office was in a big building on the first floor. I stopped working at four o'clock and left the building. I said goodbye and went downstairs. The stairs were made from iron and were coarse meshed. I was wearing a pair of high heeled shoes. They looked very nice and I felt good. I liked them. As I was in a hurry I went downstairs quickly. But a few seconds later I tripped on the hemline of my coat and fell down. I slid six or seven steps downwards. At first I didn't know what had happened. I felt a bit dizzy and after a while I went back to my office. I told my colleagues what had happened, and they told me that they had heard a noise, but they didn't know what it was. After a short rest I went home. This time I was more cautious than before. On my way home I parked my car in front of the doctor's house. After the examination he said to me, that I had had a great portion of luck and that nothing was broken.
Nicky....many thanks in advance.
Love Tine
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Hello Tine
I want to tell you about a really bad mishap. It happened a long time ago when I was working in an office. The office was in a big building on the first floor. I stopped working at four o'clock and left the building - and wanted to leave the buildingDas kannst du noch gar nicht sagen weil du noch gar nicht das Gebäude verlassen hast ;-). I said goodbye and went downstairs. The stairs were made from iron and were coarse meshed. I was wearing a pair of high heeled shoes. They looked very nice and I felt good. I liked them. As I was in a hurry I went downstairs quickly. But a few seconds later I tripped on the hemline of my coat and fell down. I slid six or seven steps downwards. At first I didn't know what had happened. I felt a bit dizzy and after a while I went back to my office. I told my colleagues what had happened and they told me that they had heard a noise, but they didn't know what it was. After a short rest I went home. This time I was more cautious than before. On my way home I parked my car in front of the doctor's house. After the examination he said to me, that I had had a great portion of luck and that nothing was broken.
Okay Tine.
Love
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Dear Nicky....
May I ask you something??
I am writing to ask you whether you have time to consider my correcting letter. 
I would be grateful if you could send me the ok.
I do apologize most sincerely for my impatience.
Love Tine 
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Dear Nicky,
Yes, you are quite right. It was a really big blooper.
I stopped working at four o'clock and wanted to leave the building.
Many thanks for your correction.
Love Tine
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Dear Nicky,
As every year I have written a short poem. First of all I would like to thank you very much for your excellent lessons. You give us some good advices for learning this language. We always enjoy your class and learn a lot, and we highly appreciate all your great help.
Good in an adjective
it is a word that describes nouns,
well is usually an adverb.
But people often use good,
when they should use well.
Our class is not always very good,
but when we continue to learn with you,
we will all speak English very well.
Sometimes I'm not very good at concentrating,
but it's good to be here.
Good food, good fun, well done,
it is a good idea,
to learn the English language well.
I have a good saying,
you do something well,
but a thing is good,
and we feel good.
Dear Nicky, many thanks for your correction.
Love Tine
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Oh Tine Gut, dass du mich dran erinnert hast, denn ich hatte es nur kurz gelesen, weil ich krank war und dann verreist war  
As every year I have written a short poem. First of all I would like to thank you very much for your excellent lessons. You give us some good advices for learning this language. We always enjoy your class and learn a lot, and we highly appreciate all your great help. advice ist schon mehrzahl.
Good in an adjective
it is a word that describes nouns,
well is usually an adverb.
But people often use good,
when they should use well. In England geht man rüber immer "good" als adverb zu benutzen. Das macht mich rassend, aber eine Sprache ist eben beweglich.
Our class is not always very good,
but when we continue to learn with you,
we will all speak English very well.
Sometimes I'm not very good at concentrating,
but it's good to be here.
Good food, good fun, well done,
it is a good idea,
to learn the English language well.
I have a good saying,
you do something well,
but a thing is good,
and we feel good.
I would leave it like this Tine, because you have written it very well! In a poem the new lines always begin with a capital letter.
Love
Nicky
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Dear Nicky.....
Sorry for my impatience.......
Nicky.....please get me right, I don't want get on your nerves...
I need this text on Thursday. Have a look please.
Many many thanks in advance......
Love Tine
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